Netoge no Yome - 06 here, Assassination Classroom in work, but not too soon, Kabaneri will have to wait.
upd: v2 patch to fix few typos. See comments in this post.
0033: On, I see... -> Oh, I see... 1044: ...dsince -> ...since 1742: an history -> a history 1818: -> this line sounds like a double negative. Maybe it could be: -> "I'm going to be sad not seeing your beauty for over a month." ...even that sounds a bit odd though. O.o
changes to match style of line at 1854: 0557: "Real-life Offline." -> "Real-life Offline". 0722: After that, choose "yes," and- -> After that, choose "yes", and- 0816: Your name is going to be "Mu-tan." -> Your name is going to be "Mu-tan".
Also, AFAIK, according to rules, commas and periods going inside quotation marks. It would be a pain in the ass to remember changing them every time anyway, and I had my share of "?!" vs "!?" wars in the past, so I don't want to touch it again.
Thanks. ^^
ReplyDelete0033: On, I see... -> Oh, I see...
1044: ...dsince -> ...since
1742: an history -> a history
1818: -> this line sounds like a double negative. Maybe it could be: -> "I'm going to be sad not seeing your beauty for over a month." ...even that sounds a bit odd though. O.o
changes to match style of line at 1854:
0557: "Real-life Offline." -> "Real-life Offline".
0722: After that, choose "yes," and- -> After that, choose "yes", and-
0816: Your name is going to be "Mu-tan." -> Your name is going to be "Mu-tan".
Aww, I'll fix first 3 later.
DeleteAlso, AFAIK, according to rules, commas and periods going inside quotation marks. It would be a pain in the ass to remember changing them every time anyway, and I had my share of "?!" vs "!?" wars in the past, so I don't want to touch it again.
Almost forgot to say - thank you.
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